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[Aggressive Alpine Skiing]

WOOT!

AFTER ABOUT 75 TRIES I FINALLY BEAT IT!!! :D :D :D :D :D...It was a good game.

[Idiocy Test]

I got 40/40!

Sure I wasn't being honest, but I was trying to get the right answers! Nice test.

[Flash Button Hit Tutorial]

I was always wondering what the hit thing did!!

Well I really hope that idiot flash artists look at this because I find it hard to click on a lot of buttons. Liiike the Mortal Kombat Mishaps flash. Those buttons were painful to click on. This helped alot, soo thanks.

grandmapotatoes responds:

you're welcome. that's why i submitted it, so people will stop making those hard-to-click-on buttons.

[B.G.T.F.]

Well...

It would help ALOT if the text was readable.

LYP responds:

\0-0/ these are glasses
please get them

[Flash4beginners]

A few compliments and tips...

Hehe...Flash4beginners...the 4 was creative lol. In this paragraph I will kind of compare it to Ultimate Tutorial 2, lol. I really liked how you animated it (you showed exactly how to do everything). I also liked your choice of music, I didn't really love UT2's music. It's actually better than UT2, but the only down side is that it doesn't have as much stuff, just flash, which isn't bad.

The masking part really helped me out, because I didn't know how to do that. Thanks!!

I also found some mistakes. In the motion tweening and the motion guide section it doesnt tell you to make the circle a symbol, which you must do, at least I think so. When you finish the motion tweening tutorial, it automatically redirects you to gamecubicle.net... Also, there are some typos, but since you're from Holland, and English isn't your first language, I'll make an acception. Also, this flash is not appropriate for all audiences, you said FUCK. *gasp* Also, the mouse cursor thing that you use in your animations of the tutorial is a little crooked, not that its a problem.

For the music section, you should tell how to set music to buttons, like in your menu. I already know how to do it, but it would be a help to a lot of people. The individual sound compression part really would've helped me last month because I was scrambling around the forums begging for how to do that. -.-

I hope this helped.

Some other comments---
-Mario's Revenge SE looks cool!
-You have Firefox! Yay!
-I spent over an hour looking at this! It was sooo good!!
-Aww...I only found 3 easter eggs
-This is my longest review EVER, so you better be happy!
-This flash goes into my favorites! (#4!)
-YOU go into my favorites! (#2!!)
-You make the best tutorials in the world!
-Lalala...wasted text space...
-Okay, amazingly, I'm finished.

GAMECUBICLE responds:

Thanks for the long review.

Anyways... So it auto spawns my site in the motion tweening section? Fuck.. gotta fix that.

Anyways, you dont have to convert something into a symbol to make a tween.

O yeah.. there are only 3 easter eggs btw :P

And yeah, sorry for some of the typos, but its still less then in most of my other tutorials i guess.

and uhhh. The 4 in Flash4beginners is because it is the fourth part in the Flashforbeginners series :P

[~Techno Python~]

Pretty good

What is that song called? I really want it!

[Sabermania]

Too...much...star...wars...

Star Wars is flooding the portal, but this flash game roxorz my boxorz so its okay :D

[Treasure Assault v1.0]

I remember protecting this!! Woo!

Also, Backstreet Boys suck. Never use their music in a flash ever again.

[CabbaggePatchDoll Dressup]

Aww...

It's nice that you made a game for your daughter.

[Terrorist Hunt v5.0]

Some detailed suggestions/comments for 6.0

-The enemies were CTs...then I noticed the game was called "Terrorist Hunt". It would make sense if all the CTs were hunting one T, but thats just silly. :P
-You need to make the sg552 actually make sg552 gun noises.
-Make the enemies move (like their body, don't make them wobble over to a certain area). Draw them if you have to.
-Make the crosshair movie clip overlap the mouse cursor so it's not in the way
-If there's a chance that your computer may lag during the game, then make quality buttons.
-The music was kinda annoying at the main menu, and very repetitive.
-Make the freakin' gun automatic!
-Allow the gun to use it's zoom feature, like in the game.
-Make more weapons that you can buy with the money you get from killing CTs.
-Make the enemies spawn in different places, it's too repetitive.
-Make some gore, and leave enemy carcasses there when they die.

If you don't read this you are one stupid person.