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Not bad.

I'm a huge fan of EBA, so here is my constructive review!

Some tips that could make it better in a possible sequel:
1. Higher FPS: The frame rate was far too slow in comparison to EBA. Make it like 24-48ish.
2. Make sounds for each beat: In EBA, it feels like you're a part of the song when it makes the little beat sound whenever you hit a note.
3. Nicer looking visuals: Make stuff prettier. Maybe whore it out with some gloss or something?

Time to go S-rank JJF again!

XceeD responds:

Thanks for the review.
1. The FPS is at 60. I'll test raising it to the max (120) and see how it looks then.
2. Hmm... I know what you mean. I WAS going to except I actually didn't like the fact that EBA added those small beats. My friend suggested it to me also but I disregarded it. I think that adding those beats would "mess up" the song. I wanted the player to ONLY hear the song. But if you think it's better, I'll check it out.
3. Okay :D!

I really appreciate the constructive criticism, unlike all those other people that just go "BLAM!".

Neato.

Killing children, Santa, and elderly has never been so hard to control! Woo! You should've set it to different keys, like QWAS or something more squarey.

-MasterLock

Wonchop responds:

I dunno how to program keys to anything but the arrow keys and space. <=( I'll have to ask one of my AS buddies in the future.

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Graphics: I didn't really like how none of the sprites were in the same style; like, you could have made them yourself if you have the attention span/MS Paint skills.

Style: I haven't seen a SSBM game before.

Sound: Some of the SSBM menu sound recordings were weird, like you cut some of it off so it doesn't echo. Also, the calm girl voice was weird.

Violence: It's a violent game. Yipee.

Interactivity: I found it very annoying how you would be completely fucked if a bee touched you in Race to the Finish, and how Master Hand can kill you in one hit. There's also a shitload more glitches and stuff, but I'm too lazy to type them.

Humor: No humor here.

Overall: I'll give you credit for doing all that hardcore ActionScripting, which must have been really hard, considering how much I suck at it.

Cleod-9 responds:

Thanks for the review, you at least explained why u didn't like unlike some others.

Good concept,

But make it so that the graphics are better and so that the human player can actually use their super attacks.

HankChill responds:

The human player can see their super attacks. You obviously don't read instructions very well do you. You can only use super attacks WHEN YOUR HEALTH IS LOWER THAN 100.

I have an Actionscript question...

What's the code for making a dress up where you click buttons to change stuff, such as yours? I only know how to do a drag and drop one. (did this review make any sense?)

Sneifo responds:

well, I coded it myself and I don't give m y codes to other people. But thx for asking.

A lot of room for improvement

You could definately work on the graphics, because they kind of look like crap (no offense lol). Also, I highly reccomend adding music, it would beef up your game a lot. Lastly, don't make one-hit-kills, it makes the game too easy. Take examples from similar games such as "Defend Your Castle", "Demonic Defence 3 & 4 (1 and 2 sucked...)", and "Storm the House".

bigftballjock responds:

Yes i would have improved it A LOT, but i had a deadline i had to stick to. :( but i will improve it in my free time. Thanks for the review!

I was always wondering what the hit thing did!!

Well I really hope that idiot flash artists look at this because I find it hard to click on a lot of buttons. Liiike the Mortal Kombat Mishaps flash. Those buttons were painful to click on. This helped alot, soo thanks.

grandmapotatoes responds:

you're welcome. that's why i submitted it, so people will stop making those hard-to-click-on buttons.

Well...

It would help ALOT if the text was readable.

LYP responds:

\0-0/ these are glasses
please get them

A few compliments and tips...

Hehe...Flash4beginners...the 4 was creative lol. In this paragraph I will kind of compare it to Ultimate Tutorial 2, lol. I really liked how you animated it (you showed exactly how to do everything). I also liked your choice of music, I didn't really love UT2's music. It's actually better than UT2, but the only down side is that it doesn't have as much stuff, just flash, which isn't bad.

The masking part really helped me out, because I didn't know how to do that. Thanks!!

I also found some mistakes. In the motion tweening and the motion guide section it doesnt tell you to make the circle a symbol, which you must do, at least I think so. When you finish the motion tweening tutorial, it automatically redirects you to gamecubicle.net... Also, there are some typos, but since you're from Holland, and English isn't your first language, I'll make an acception. Also, this flash is not appropriate for all audiences, you said FUCK. *gasp* Also, the mouse cursor thing that you use in your animations of the tutorial is a little crooked, not that its a problem.

For the music section, you should tell how to set music to buttons, like in your menu. I already know how to do it, but it would be a help to a lot of people. The individual sound compression part really would've helped me last month because I was scrambling around the forums begging for how to do that. -.-

I hope this helped.

Some other comments---
-Mario's Revenge SE looks cool!
-You have Firefox! Yay!
-I spent over an hour looking at this! It was sooo good!!
-Aww...I only found 3 easter eggs
-This is my longest review EVER, so you better be happy!
-This flash goes into my favorites! (#4!)
-YOU go into my favorites! (#2!!)
-You make the best tutorials in the world!
-Lalala...wasted text space...
-Okay, amazingly, I'm finished.

GAMECUBICLE responds:

Thanks for the long review.

Anyways... So it auto spawns my site in the motion tweening section? Fuck.. gotta fix that.

Anyways, you dont have to convert something into a symbol to make a tween.

O yeah.. there are only 3 easter eggs btw :P

And yeah, sorry for some of the typos, but its still less then in most of my other tutorials i guess.

and uhhh. The 4 in Flash4beginners is because it is the fourth part in the Flashforbeginners series :P

Oh my god I love you (in a non-gay way) :D

You helped me out SOOO FRIGGING MUCH on this. I have learned more stuff here than I have anywhere else. This is by a landslide the best tutorial I have ever used. I have read every section of the Flash and Newgrounds subjects, mainly because I don't have Swift3D and I'm not really interested in Photoshop. In conclusion, YOU RULE!!!!!!!!!! (That's ten exclamation marks!)

Don't respond in Dutch I can't understand it :D

GAMECUBICLE responds:

Why would i respond in dutch? Lol
Anyways, did you really read all the flash sections :O
Must have takes some time i guess... how long did it take? 1 hour?
Anyways, thanks for the 10 :D

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